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The Freedom

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© Sebastian Grau   
   
Ich habe diesen Text im Englischunterricht geschrieben, mein Englisch ist nicht das beste. Ich sitze gerade daran die Geschichte in Deutsch zu schreiben, diese wird dann auch um einiges länger! In der Geschichte schreibe ich über meinen Wunsch einfach frei im Universum umher zu fliegen. Ich hoffe das euch die Geschichte trotz meines schlechten Englisch trotzdem anspricht! Ich bitte euch auch darum mir in den Kommentaren Tipps und Verbesserungsvorschläge zu geben. Ich habe mich noch nie an eine Geschichte gewagt die länger als 2 Seiten wird.

Grüsse Seregant

It was a rainy day and he walk into a forest. He loves rain, the cold wind and the sound of rain. He don’t wear any jacket. He saw a lightning and a few seconds later he hear the gigantic thunder. He looks up and saw in a cloudwindow the stars, the universe. Right now he feels so small. He never will get a answer to all of his questions about the space, only theories not facts. That makes him afraid, the world is nothing! We are only a planet of infinitely planets. We think we are the kings but we are only a grain of sand in the universe. Maybe in the future we will travel to the mars and we will feel us big and powerful. Every time when he looks up into the universe he lost all his care about the world, he only want to flight outside of this earth. Flight away in a little spaceship into a other galaxy and maybe he will meet a other life form. He knows it is only a dream and he never will flight trough the space. That makes him depressed, he walks deeper in the forest. After a few minutes he stands on front of a big canyon, he look down and he don’t think anything. He jumps down the canyon but before he hits the ground a light stops him. He’s nose touch the ground and slowly he floats up to the space. After a few minutes he was in a big spaceship. 5 people stands around him and give him an apple. He looks around, he was in the cockpit. One of them talk to him “Welcome on our spaceship we call it “the freedom”. He was scared but also happy, he was in the space, his dream is real.

The End
 

http://www.webstories.cc 05.05.2024 - 06:20:41